An amateur BDSM novel

Hello, my sub and I are working on a novel with BDSM undertones. It's not all out erotica, but there's some steamy scenes between the two main characters, a dominant, aggressive vampire and a masochistic little princess. The first sex scene happens in chapter 3, which isn't up yet, but the first two chapters are up. We would appreciate comments, likes, critics, etc.

You can find our story here.

Thanks for reading us, and hope you will enjoy Hadrien and Lianna's adventures as much as we do.

Thanks for the comments, duly noted on the first chapter, will see what can be done about that in revisions. The third chapter should be ready before the end of the week. Hadrien will be awaken, and he will take Lianna for his. *grins*

Chapter 3 is up, the sex scene has been pushed to chapter 4 so will take a bit longer for it to be up, but Hadrien awakens in this chapter.

Subgirl87 said:

Long read but worth it, I love the character of Hadrien, scary, violent vampire is hot, can't wait to read that sex scene, was actually getting wet by the end of chapter 3 when he just touched her face. When will the sex scene be out? I will tell Master about this story, hope he punishes me for getting wet for someone else.

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Thanks for the comments. You will have to be patient for the sex scene. It is actually written down but in the process of being reviewed/edited, so it shouldn't be too long but life has been interfering. Will keep you girls updated when it's up.

Real Life has been interfering with the release of new chapters (fuck cancer is all I'll say), but this story is going to continue as soon as possible, we apologize for the delays to those who enjoy reading us.

This story has resumed, the first sex scene is in for all you perverts. Hopefully we will be able to put out chapters more regularly in the future. Enjoy the read.

Thanks for the comments to you both, it's always nice to hear people enjoy reading us and it encourages us to write more. The next two chapters are in the editing process, hopefully we'll be able to put one of those up this weekend. There will be no sex in the next two chapter, but then Hadrien will bend Lianna over her dead father's throne in the one currently being written so don't worry, there will be more of that coming up too.

Thank you KinkyGirl, we just published another chapter of our story. No sex in this chapter, but plenty of action and a bit of blood and gore. Enjoy!

A new chapter is up! Thanks for the support, reader comments always help to motivate us. CuriouslyInterested, we've taken your advice into consideration and tried to make chapter 1 a bit more readable. Hope you keep reading, and next chapter will have a sex scene, we promise!

Sorry for another long delay in publishing more content, but a new hot chapter is up, thanks all for the nice comments and support!

This is a co-authored work so we need time to both work on the text before we are ready to publish new chapters. Add in RL interference and that's why it can take some times for new chapters to be published. Thanks for the comments, we think that throne scene was pretty hot too, glad you enjoyed it.